Hi Tangi its Tamisha I really like you writing about germs its has lots of information about them. It made me think of the time i learnt about germs and bacteria. Maybe next time you could fix some punctuation in your writing but aside that it looks great.
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Hi Tangi its Tamisha
ReplyDeleteI really like you writing about germs its has lots of information about them. It made me think of the time i learnt about germs and bacteria. Maybe next time you could fix some punctuation in your writing but aside that it looks great.
Thank you bye