Planet pandora was nothing like earth . The animals were indigo with black dots,strips. They carry bows and arrows on them all the time.When I was walking around the trees hugged me.The trees are big and bosky and huge as the sky tower . The grass at pandora was fluffy and green.Also the water at pandora was crystal blue with a hint of red that was the blood of …. Planet pandora looks like a haunted house.The houses at pandora are made out of wood and it is huge.The creature at pandora are grey,black and has some pink dots and black stripes. The moon in pandora is a big circle and it is huge .The trees were as tall as houses. Their leaves green and bright. A plain of lush grass that stretched like a desert. The water at pandora was blue as the sky,wet as rain and flows like your floating at sea. At pandora the creatures were as dangerous as a lion and a gorilla. I saw floating planets like birds flying in the sky.
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WALT-Recraft our writing to add more descriptive language,Use similes and metaphors,Identify and experiment with using personification .
Kia ora Tangi I really like
ReplyDeletehow you wrote your planet description. It made me think of some planets that i know and how it looks like. Have you thought about going there and living on the planet?If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://pespriyap.blogspot.com/
Hey Priya thanks for the comment and yes i would love to live there.
DeleteKia ora Tangi I really like I really like your Planet Description . It made me think of the planets that i know.Did you do it by yourself .it looked really hard for one person. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://pesamyleigha.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteHi Amyleigh thanks for the comment and yes i did do it by my self it was really hard but easy at the same time.
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